"He sat down on the bench, pulled off his cap and scratched his snowy, white hair. The man pulled off his shoes after a long day playing golf which revealed old, wrinkly skin. After putting on some different shoes he slowly struggled into his 1994 Volkswagon Beetle before driving to his grandchildren's house. He made himself a nice, warm cup of tea before settling down and telling his grandchildren their favourite story from WW2". Alec Mills
"The fierce, crashing waves feel like ice cubes. The icy water is biting the edges of my wetsuit. It slowly seeps into my toast warm wetsuit. The vicious sea spray washes my face like a cold shower. The bitter cold makes me shiver. My teeth chatter, my body quivers in the chilly water. On the shore the rough wind gusts blow sand into my eyes. The freezing air rips at my face. The icy wind slashes my body" Greta Luke
"The beach was dark, the sun was going down. The dark clouds were rumbling in. I needed to put my jacket on. The ice cold sand was seeping into my shoes, making my feet grow numb, my arms were covered in goosebumps and my legs were shaking in the strong wind. The waves were hitting the shore, making loud, echoing booms throughout." Pagan Buchanan
This is just a sample! There were so many great ones and I will continue to add these as time goes on! We are currently working on our speeches and also trying to work towards entering the Intermediate Writer Awards - this is really exciting - stay tuned for that one!!!
It's been a fantastic week - Week 3 done and dusted - next week we put on our dancing shoes!
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